8 Analogies used by high school students in English Essays

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These are examples of creative writing.

1. When she tried to sing, it sounded like a walrus giving birth to farm equipment.

High school students in the classroom

2. Her eyes twinkled, like the mustache of a man with a cold.

3. She was like a magnet:attractive from the back, repulsive from the front.

4. The ballerina rose gracefully en Pointe and extended one slender leg behind her, like a dog at a fire hydrant.

5. She grew on him like she was a colony of E. coli and he was room temperature Canadian beef.

6. She had him like a toenail stuck in a shag carpet.

7. The lamp just sat there, like an inanimate object.

8. Her face was a perfect oval, like a circle that had two sides gently compressed by a Thigh Master.
For a list of 21 see:
High School English Essays

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